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| Great tribute to your longevity. Things just aren't made to last anymore. Thank god someone is beating the odds. Your most interesting stanzas for me is: No direction Looking for the end Void of love Then, you my friend Saved me
I like the way you used void instead of devoid. Your choice of wording makes it seem all encompassing, rather than just a lack of. Also, that line is a sharp contrast to the following line. I like the feel of it. Like I was completely and totally lost and then "snap" you saved me. At twenty, I was lost and very lonely Engaged to a twit to whom monster trucks and Wrestle Mania brought ecstasy Poor little me.
I think I married (and consequently divorced) your twit. Ha Ha.  Great Poem!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'll give you a daisy a day. I'll love you until all the rivers run still and the four winds we know blow away"...Hank Snow |
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| 19 "These times are troubled and these times are good... and they're always gonna be" Years Today.
line in quotes is from "When I Said I do" by Clint and Lisa Black
We must travel in the direction of our fear John Berryman
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| 20 years today.
We must travel in the direction of our fear John Berryman
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| 23 years today! Pride and passion, you and me, Happy Anniversary!
We must travel in the direction of our fear John Berryman
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