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Great tribute to your longevity. Things just aren't made to last anymore. Thank god someone is beating the odds.

Your most interesting stanzas for me is:

No direction
Looking for the end
Void of love
Then, you my friend
Saved me


I like the way you used void instead of devoid. Your choice of wording makes it seem all encompassing, rather than just a lack of.

Also, that line is a sharp contrast to the following line. I like the feel of it. Like I was completely and totally lost and then "snap" you saved me.

At twenty, I was lost and very lonely
Engaged to a twit to whom monster trucks and
Wrestle Mania brought ecstasy
Poor little me.


I think I married (and consequently divorced) your twit. Ha Ha. LOL

Great Poem!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I'll give you a daisy a day. I'll love you until all the rivers run still and the four winds we know blow away"...Hank Snow
 
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19 "These times are troubled and these times are good... and they're always gonna be" Years Today.


line in quotes is from "When I Said I do" by Clint and Lisa Black

We must travel in the direction of our fear
John Berryman

 
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I hope all your tomorrows when they become Todays turn out even happierSmile

 
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20 years today.


We must travel in the direction of our fear
John Berryman

 
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23 years today!

Pride and passion, you and me, Happy Anniversary!


We must travel in the direction of our fear
John Berryman

 
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