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this is a poem for my boyfriend (well, kinda about him) But its supposed to be telling of how we would spend the perfect Christmas Eve together..
Perfect Christmas Eve
In his message/ yes,he did say/ he would be here/
his will would find a way/I sip hot chocolate/
not knowing what's instore/then suddenly I hear/
a knock on the door/As I open the door/a gust of cold air rushes in/along with him,a book,/roses and a grin/His cheeks were rosy red/from the cold winter air/he made me shiver/with a passionate stare/A kiss hello/and "why did you come"/replied with "i want to spend tonight/with my special someone"/he gave me the roses/and another kiss/Our first christmas together/something I didnt want to miss/we cuddled by the fire/and shared an embrace/as cute Christmas kisses/he left upon my face/His hand on my waist/his sweet lips I taste/reading his book/but always sneaking a look/at the sparkling twinkle in his eye/the snow came down/all around/ only sound in the night/were our exchanging vows/of someimes,somewheres,and more/somehows/the hours passed by/snowflakes did fly/and soon we were/snowed in alone/"More mistletoe please" made me weak in the knees/and I know that/hes my true love/Im so happy/for on the special night/Im with the one I love/We glance outside/at the beautiful stars above/he holds me close/kisses my nose/Oh, do I love him so!/And holding him I feel great/I never want to let him go/Yes,we did tire/Fell asleep with our hands linked/hearts desire,and/goodnight kiss on the cheek/He softly sleeps nearby/I cant help but sigh/this was the perfect Christmas Eve. (Cora Nicole Kilcoyne..for Jordan)
tell me what you think, please, oh and / means a new line if u didnt know! smile
 
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hey it was great it made me think of my special someone and how i can't wait till we sahre a special day together Razz

love will find a way
stina
 
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Razz this is a beautiful poem and I hope you dont mind but I sent it to a few friends but ur name was there and ill see what they say too

-HOTTIE FROM HELL-
 
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sweet poem, i think he is going to be really touched by it.

2b or not 2b
 
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I liked it made me think of joe but i think he'll love it too Smile
 
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nice i liked...think i'll be in here more often.......free the mind Smile
 
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