I really liked this one. I liked the way that there was the poem but then your thought's in italics. I love it when people do that in poems. Good Job. As for a title I don't know - I'm not too good at stuff like that - I'm sure you'll find the right one for it though.
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I used to think that I could not go on And life was nothing but an awful song - I believe I can fly - R. Kelly
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This question seems to haunt the whole poem, asking for just one word from your parents- one word to let you know how they feel about you, and that they love you and want you. *sigh* I'm sorry it's like this, thanks for sharing. Well done.
Harv Stella Splendens December 22, 1985-March 27, 2003
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