I hate you
I hate how I hurt
I hate how I miss
I hate how you broke my heart
I hate my love for you

I hate that you love him
I hate how he makes you smile
I hate thats its not me
I hope you rot in hell

Very strong words for a little poem, that is good I think. Also I am sure many people have felt your pain. I only see 2 things wrong in the poem. The way you spell its it should be it's, and thats should be that. Everthing else is good.
!~*~!Coley!~*~!

It says alot in just a few words, and has me hating the person too.

RFM

I hate my love for you

Don't we all hate the love we have for that significant other.

I can relate, perhaps too much?

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-LaLi

Ouch, so much hate, and the sole "hope" here was
I hope you rot in hell
. Very natural and very well-expressed. Simply, succintly, absolutely, powerfully.
John Doe, that makes me smile, the infamous 'unfamous' John Doe !
By this time, I hope, your hate has healed and you're hoping for better things, if not then I hope it'd and you'd soon be .
Think about it, the existence of hate reflects the existence of love. Oh yes that's what we hate sometimes, but I just love that (hate reflecting love).

~There is no duty more obligatory than the repayment of kindness.~
-Cicero (106 BC - 43 BC)

[This message was edited by LetswriteNshare on 06-23-04 at 02:32 PM.]

At least you're taking ownership of your feelings. That's a good start.

This immediately made me think of that poem Julia Stiles recites in "10 Things I Hate About You" except that you really hate this person and she didn't! It's a lot of emotion for one lil poem and you convey it so well. Short, simple, sweet!

LovelyRyansGirl

"I want to keep my own definition of myself. I don't ever want to feel that I've evaporated into somebody else's idea of me" -Meg Ryan

turn your frown upside down!

Very good poem. It shows alot of emotion and it describes what alot of us feel sometimes.

u know what??i hate her 2 4 being this way..
and right now im trying 2 hate him with all of my heart...god help us..

I like the last line that is funny!

~sunshine~

Definitely speaks of what so many in breakups truly feel like!--but politely (or pride-fully) don't say/.