Wow....muy interesante! Very original...sort of mysterious and slightly dark...i like it

I liked your plays on words..
"The floor supports my...wait. " and the title...

Thanks for sharing...keep it up!

Peace

"They laugh at us because we're different, we laugh at them because they're the same."
-?

I like the subject-being that I am an anxious puppet.
You've got great style-thanks for sharing.

The optimist calling on a great pessimist "I believe that when death closes our eyes we shall awaken to a light, of which our sunlight is but the shadow." - Arthur Schopenhauer

I just like going off of my random thoughts during any time of the day...I was unemployed for a year and a half, and that's basically writers block for me because I'm inspired by working....weird enough to say that that's how I have a chance to write things down and elaborate on my thoughts. So since now that I have a job, I tend to write more pieces. You can find a link in my profile to my poetry webpage if you're interested. Thanks for the comments Piglet and Luvy....hehe.

See you later..

P.C.Hernandez

I can't seem to post any more new topics.....can anybody explain to me why this is?

Sincerely,

Confused and flustered.

"Frustration is lack of happiness." - P.C.Hernandez

P.C.Hernandez

Hi PCH,

There have been some changes recently, essentially to try to "rationalise" the Writers Club.

If you go to the main Groups page, you'll see there are now the "original" Writers Club (this one), and several new ones - the "Workshop", the "Poetry" and the "Prose" forums (fora? - did we ever sort that out?)

The "original WC" is now (sort of) locked. You can only post comments to existing topics (as you did above), but can't post new topics here.

Instead, you post new work to one of the three new fora/ums (i) if your work is "completed", in Prose or Poetry as appropriate, or (ii) in Workshop if you want others to offer suggestions, criticisms advice etc about how to improve it.

The link below explains it all better than drooling shaking incontinent Davdoodles possibly could:
http://forum.quoteland.com/eve/forums?a=tpc&s=586192041&f=7411968032&m=4091982046

Davdoodles
XXX

This is too confusing....I guess I'll just find another post to post on.... (

"Frustration is lack of happiness." - P.C.Hernandez

P.C.Hernandez

I just loved the imagery here, as well as the slightly mischeivious, and definetly witty plays on words. Great work.

This is very interesting.

Is All That we See or Seem, but a Dream within a Dream?

-Tygrr Eyzz