's dictionaries come in handy even after approx. two years (Oct 8 and 9 - coincidence
Sheesh, I don't recall connecting adolescence with pupae and evolution, though the concepts now seem so "there". And I think "oleginous" is a good word to describe a side of me
! What's "aussi"? Merci, if you explain
. "a minor Darwinism", cute. You managed to put across the core of adolescence: change.Lost and Found:
One of my favourites by you, that I'd remember.
Rain, tears and blood...
"one way trip" aw I dislike the sense of inevitability and fear the inevitability these lines express.
'build weight', 'envelops'; 'nothingness', 'numbly'; 'filters down'-'spills'-'runs down'-'drums out'-'flows freely' -- I get the impression of feeling burdened and asphyxiated, numbed, and then falling down down down... something true of someone sitting with a knife in hand... I hope whoever wishes for a knife finds a pen nearby... or a copy of your poem.Nuage:Hey little cloud
Are you lonely man?
"Wind prevail, don't they..."
do you imply, winds
"But don't you wish you knew it..."
-knew that 'Life's a bitch', you imply, correct?
I don't recall imagining clouds as lonely, albeit I have thought so regarding the sun. Perhaps loneliness and love permeate every being.
I feel by this time you have found your "cloud crowd", may life offer you playmates that take away a bit of your void.
, I also found your foreward useful and interesting (D_W
would be impressed
, he recommends authors' brief elucidiations
). Your writing has become more 'considered' now, however it was commendable even two years ago. My teenage-ish poems would seem infantile if we compare
. Keep sharing! Oh and P.S.: YAY!
"My mother and father desired a child and they begot me.
And I wanted a mother and a father and I begot night and the sea."
-Kahlil Gibran, "Sand and foam"
[This message was edited by LetswriteNshare on 10-08-04 at 09:42 AM.]