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Dawn



Dew
droppings
sit on leaves
waiting for fog
to lift her
gauzy
veil.



~NW


Ecce quam bonum et quam jucundum habitare fratres in unum ~ Psalm133
 
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nice. Smile
especially since the rains have now started in india... this struck me as visually very evocative.

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"YOU are the big drop of dew under the lotus leaf,
I am the smaller one on its upper side,'
said the dewdrop to the lake."
-- Rabindranath Tagore.

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much love, light and laughter,
Ananya.


Scatter joy ~ Ralph Waldo Emerson.
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We can't all be stars, but we can all twinkle.
We may not have it all together, but together we have it all.
 
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Ooo Nice ethereal, gossamer image! ~~lb~~
 
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Ananya and LB, Thanks for reading and replying. Am quite nature inspired these days.


Ecce quam bonum et quam jucundum habitare fratres in unum ~ Psalm133
 
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Ugh, facebook is catching, I read the poem, say I was way late on it and thought 'Where's the like button?'

That aside, I do like it. Reminds me of Carl Sandburg 'Fog'. Smile

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Great Presentation
 
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Thanks Ms. Harv...sandburg's fog was classic ...little cat's feet.

Thanks QT.


NW


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