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jchill
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Gang violence (Haiku)
10-2-09

Dirty city streets
Alleyways of corrosion
Filth of flesh and blood

J.C. Hill
 
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lost butterfly
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Wow, Jack! A departure for you, much like my "They Call Her Merry Em" poem was for me. A lot said in those few words. Good job. ~~lb~~
 
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jchill
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Thanks LB, in a sense of the word, not true Japanese Haiku, but I think it fits.

Jack
 
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