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this is an amazing piece! the fact that you do not choose to "educate" but instead let the realization come from the reader itself. it should cause guilt i believe in those or at least a split second of an awakening.
these days i'm writing about love. You know how that goes. i enjoy poems like this. it reminds me what expression is all about.
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I would agree that this is a safe poem. It is a good poem in the context of "good." With that being said I think that the poetry forum here is faltering due to poor leadership. Now that might not be a safe statement but it reflects how I feel. This forum has has had some excellent leadership in the past. Some moderators have devoted dilligent hours and generous comments to both the good and the poor poems posted here. Some moderators have devoted almost nothing but their name to the collective benefit of the poetry forum. Rico and Lionheart and Lost Buttlerfly have always been faithful to this forum and I wnat to thank them for their contributions. Thank You, Thank Ye, and Thank-ya very much. 
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I loved this poem.
Status quo as your status grows... so clever. Even more, I love that you call it a safe poem.
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