that damn apple keeps popping up but at least this time it is doing some good other than be the center point of sin and the downfall of humanity...the ending were superb and was the missing ingredient that was missing from my life-your words and your poetry
Rico Gavin Gabrielle/ Julian Alexander May 11. 2003- June 3, 2003 Gavin Gabrielle Knox (Reborn) March 21, 2004 Raw, gutsy, and in-your-face. are words that have been used. To me they describe exactly what Rico is all about. Don't ever change………comments from Songbird in the poem “ Walking Through Hell” Rico-style Unmatched - unsurpassed......Rhon831 from the poem "My Fruit" :breathless: ...... Concerned Brotha from the poem "Formality" When you see the name 'Rico' - you think of Poetry Knockout from the poem "My Fruit" MLK Jr. meets Kanye Gamzplayer from '' a Safe Poem"
Posts: 1362 | Location: Atlanta, GA | Registered: 08-19-02
Rico, my dear friend of many years, thank you so very much for your faithful reading and kind words. They mean a lot to me. Hope all is well with you and your family. ~lb~
Posts: 1915 | Location: somewhere over the rainbow | Registered: 06-30-02
Sorry LB that I missed this when first posted. But it’s here and it’s just as lovely now as it was then. The last stanza made me want to cry I had visions of long ago in a hospital room.
Jack
Posts: 1635 | Location: foristell, Mo. USA | Registered: 08-18-01
Thank you Jack...it's been here, there & everywhere...I'm sure you must have spied it & commented on it somewhere before...but I'm entering a new decade next month, so don't count on ME remembering who, what, where, & when! eh, boy...
~~lb~~
Posts: 1915 | Location: somewhere over the rainbow | Registered: 06-30-02
I totally thought this was beautiful, I have to say that I am in agreement with Jack re the last stanza.
Beautifully done again, this is wonderful.
I don't want to get to the end of my life and find that I lived just the length of it. I want to have lived the width of it as well. - Diane Ackerman, quoted in "Newsweek"
eh, boy...
