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Now, I know the ending might seem a bit simplistic, but if you understand where I'm coming from, you'll see the underlying meaning of it all.

Paint it Black

Paint it black so I can't see,
the hurt and pain inside of me.
Wash away the endless tears,
strike me dead, so I'll have no
fears. Shout it from the
mountain tops: The pain is here!
It'll never stop. Cover the
ocean with black residue, suck
my body dry, heal all my
wounds. Paint everything black,
so it'll be, just like everything
inside of me. No light shall ever
touch this skin, heart full of
sorrow, filled to the brim. Eyes
are black, can't see in my soul.
The spirit weakens, I'll never feel
whole. Closing my eyes, all I see
is dark. Black paint, has left
it's mark.


By the pricking of my thumbs, something wicked this way comes. ~Macbeth

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great work, like always. this screams loniness and a dark,dark,shadow in your life. It is Painful I know. but if this does deal with you I am sure it will get better, for your well being.

@~`~,~I am The Lost Soul of Fate, Pray that I dont find you~~^~@
 
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At first I had thought I'd read this before, but as I continued reading, I had not. But anyways, I can very much relate to this one. Thanks for sharing. Divine.

Pain, pain go away
Let me smile for just one day
And if that day I never see
Let my blood run cold and free

~*¤Lauren¤*~
 
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sad...but well written, and very relatable.

____________________________________
Phone my family, and tell them I'm lost on the sidewalk.
And no, It's not okay.
-wilco
 
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This is a very sad piece, but very well written. I can relate all to well to this piece. I felt the loneliness, the darkness, and the pain.
Thanks for sharing.

siempre~
Leslie
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Why do we crucify ourselves
Every day I crucify myself
Nothing I do is good enough for you (Tori Amos)
 
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