everywhere I turn
laughing at me, hyenas
no arms of comfort

water over rocks
passing through my mind, visions
no one to share them

now these open arms
in the desert, oasis
I wait here for her

nice poem, did you write this? your haikus are very well written. great job!

Aiden

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thank you aiden. Yes these are mine.

Fallen Oak is a genuine poet and that is a genuine Haiku if I say so myself. (I have your book on my list of books to read in 2009.)

I am a disenchatned poet, infamous archer and a diversified woodsman.

Inspiring, your poems that is.

Sand, sand every where
Beauties laying on the beach
In their bikini

Jack