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Always have dared to be different,
Disregarding how shit conflicted
That’s what’s made the biggest difference.
I’m on a mission to plant seeds
that grow crops
Before my breathing stops,
Help crackpots run blocks
Conquer the theory of man;
to fear what they don’t understand.
Take paths less traveled by
Prove your ambitions to be tried,
Succeed with no regrets
For the hearts of soldiers are challenged with the ultimate test.
Teach a nation to grow in patience
A characteristic debated
Yet so often congratulated.
Single mothers raise rugrats
in a world so tainted
While sperm donors check in unacquainted
But still related
Intelligent minds bloom
My thoughts spread like silence
in an empty room
Waiting to be consumed.

"I'm not a feminist. . . I'm just a proud black women. I don't need to be labeled."
Queen Latifah

This is a good compilation of thought. It definatley sparked some thinking in my litte head.

Thanks for sharing.

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"A lot of fellows nowadays have a B.A., M.D., or Ph.D. Unfortunately, they don't have a J.O.B."
-Fats Domino

www.amybills.com

I think this has a lot of potential; the only criticism I have is that the (although the 'flow' is nicely created) lines jump from subject to subject too quickly. Some of the lines don't really seem related enough to have transitioned into the next statement.

-Hellsangel

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I found your picture today
I swear I'll change my ways
I just called to say I want you to come back home
I just called to say, I love you come back home (Sheryl Crow and Kid Rock)

Stella Splendens
December 22, 1985-March 27, 2003
Rest in peace, mi hermanita

I always like you writting. It's always fun to read. I haven't read your work in a while. A lot of information and thing going on at the same time. It's feel good absorbing all these info and stuffs.

GO MOE!


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