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You are you, and I am me
It's not that hard, why can't you see?
The clothes I wear
The way I style my hair
That's all me, so why do you care?
Who I talk to, who I date
Why must you sit around and hate?
Have you no life of your own
You need to stop this
Soon you'll be grown
Don't you know time goes by so fast
You never know which breath will be your last
Why waste your time trying to bring me down
Your triflin' words won't make this chick frown
Cuz you are you, and I am me
It's time you realized that and let me be!

Love alwayz

I'd like to think all the people who ever hated on me...you were my inspiration!
 
Posts: 20 | Location: NC, USA | Registered: 12-18-02Reply With QuoteReport This Post
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Smooth flow and rhyme

Your triflin' words won't make this chick frown
Cuz you are you, and I am me

Changing triflin' to trifling and cuz to because would put on a final polish! Smile

thanks for sharing!

"As you fluttered in my future,
fled throughout my lifelong past
I expected every spring to bring you
to my arms, to my side." from "I always knew" by Rod McKuen
 
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